In a group, we have managed to make our own haiku individually. so, here I attach my group members' haikus. this are all our first attempt in creating a haiku..
Hidayati's Haiku; Dragonflies
I'm a dragonflies,
I has beautiful body
Can fly anywhere
My sting is poisonous
Who am I?guess me.
The Sun is shinning brightly
We are so happy
Flew away the people's hat
The wind blews strongly
And last but least, my haiku which was posted yesterday but still i want to post it here as a group because we are group of 5 and it wouldn't be complete if my haiku is not included right? hahaha..so "perasan".
Ok, now...
The field will become brownish
The air breeze is cold
so..that all 5 haikus...this was really the first time for us creating a haiku. if u look at it, first u will say..it is easy to create just three lines of poem right? but the trickiest part is that u have to do it in 5-7-5 syllables. that was the hardest thing. because everytime i think of a sentence, it either not enough syllable or more...but after a few trial, i manage to do about 3 haikus and i think, i still have to improve the sentence structure to make a heautiful and memorable haiku
So now..i think you all is able to create your own haiku..Do try it..its really fun..its a fun way of writing. you will love writing after this..
try it ok (^__^)
Naza's Haiku; Centipede
I have many legsMy sting is poisonous
Who am I?guess me.
Won's Haiku; Good day
It is a good dayThe Sun is shinning brightly
We are so happy
Lim's Haiku; The Wind
The wind is blowingFlew away the people's hat
The wind blews strongly
And last but least, my haiku which was posted yesterday but still i want to post it here as a group because we are group of 5 and it wouldn't be complete if my haiku is not included right? hahaha..so "perasan".
Ok, now...
Amy's Haiku (thats me); Autumn
When trees shed their leavesThe field will become brownish
The air breeze is cold
so..that all 5 haikus...this was really the first time for us creating a haiku. if u look at it, first u will say..it is easy to create just three lines of poem right? but the trickiest part is that u have to do it in 5-7-5 syllables. that was the hardest thing. because everytime i think of a sentence, it either not enough syllable or more...but after a few trial, i manage to do about 3 haikus and i think, i still have to improve the sentence structure to make a heautiful and memorable haiku
So now..i think you all is able to create your own haiku..Do try it..its really fun..its a fun way of writing. you will love writing after this..
try it ok (^__^)
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